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CHAPTER 44 OF 73

Chapter 44: THE KNOCKS FROM EVERYWHERE

The first knock came from the walls, the second from the floor beneath my feet, and the third from inside my chest. I couldn’t tell whether the last one was a sound or a sensation, but it passed through my ribs without hurting me. Every platform in the chamber answered with a faint vibration as pale lines beneath the stone rearranged themselves, and somewhere beyond the darkness, something enormous shifted its attention toward us.

Then the System vanished.

There was no warning or flicker; the entire interface disappeared, leaving nothing behind. For the first time since the world changed, I had no idea whether it could still see me.

"Veyric!" Nyelle shouted from the darkness to my left. I reached toward her voice, but my hand met empty air, and when I tried to move forward, the floor tilted beneath me. I dropped onto one knee, catching myself before my injured shoulder struck the stone.

"I’m here," I called.

"That’s not what I asked!"

Despite everything, I almost smiled. "I’m fine."

"You always say that when you’re absolutely not fine."

"I’ll prepare a more convincing lie next time."

"Try preparing one that doesn’t sound like you."

A faint white light appeared several steps away, illuminating Nyelle’s strained face as she found a marker on the wall. She reached for me, and I took her hand just as the third heartbeat returned. My fingers loosened instinctively, but she tightened her grip instead of letting go.

"Don’t release me," she said.

"I wasn’t planning to."

"Good. I’m not interested in finding out whether the fourth thing inside you has decided to walk around without you."

"That’s reassuring."

"I’m not trying to reassure you."

The wall light went out, leaving us in darkness again. The three knocks had stopped, but their effects continued spreading through the structure, vibrating through the soles of my feet and gathering as pressure behind my eyes. I couldn’t explain how I knew, but the world above us had heard them too; something had answered the chamber, and its response wasn’t confined to this place.

"Everyone stay where you are!" the man in the white coat called. His voice sounded distant, as though the walls swallowed his words before they could reach us. "Don’t touch the platforms!"

"Why?" Zero demanded.

"Because I don’t know what they’re connected to anymore!"

It was the first honest thing he’d said in several minutes. A sharp scrape came from the opposite side of the chamber, followed by a curse, and then the imitation Nyelle spoke.

"The lines are moving."

"Can you see them?" I asked.

"Not exactly. I can feel where they were."

That answer bothered me more than it should have. The imitation had spent much of its existence trying to understand what separated it from my sister, remembering events and repeating words without always understanding their meaning. Now it could sense the structure without seeing it, as though the chamber had begun communicating through a channel the rest of us couldn’t access.

"What are the lines doing?" I asked.

"They’re moving away from the circles." She hesitated, and I heard her shift her footing. "Toward us."

The floor lurched, and Nyelle pulled me sideways just as a narrow seam opened between the stones where I’d been standing. Pale light spilled through it, revealing no lower chamber beneath the platform but a distant expanse of silver mist. For one disorienting second, I thought I saw mountains beyond it, their dark peaks rising through the haze, before the seam snapped shut.

Nyelle stared at the floor. "That wasn’t a hole."

"No."

"What was it?"

"I don’t know."

She glanced at me. "You really need some new answers."

"I’m working on it."

White light returned from the far side of the chamber, revealing Mother beside the man in the white coat. Zero and the imitation stood near the opposite wall, while the figure with my face had disappeared. Where the pale circle had stood, a single mark now covered the stone: three rings surrounding an empty center, and the sight of it stirred a dull ache in my palm.

"Where did it go?" I asked.

The man looked up. "Who?"

"The figure. The one who was talking to us."

He searched the chamber with genuine confusion. "I don’t remember anyone else standing here."

I stared at him. "You spoke to it. You watched it, and you were afraid of it."

"I remember the fourth response, the warning, and you dropping to your knee." He rubbed his forehead, struggling to retrieve something that should have been obvious. "But I don’t remember another person."

Mother turned toward him. "Neither do I."

The words landed harder than they should have. I remembered the figure’s face and voice, the way it had tried to keep Zero away, and the fear in its eyes when the System announced that the authority conflict had been resolved. Yet everyone looked at me as though I had invented someone who had never existed.

I tightened my grip on Nyelle’s hand. "Do you remember it?"

She studied my face before answering. "I remember someone standing in front of you, but I can’t remember what face it had."

"The imitation remembers it," I said.

The imitation stepped closer, visibly unsettled by everyone’s attention. "I remember the voice telling us not to name the fourth response, but its face is gone from my memory too."

Zero rubbed a hand over its mouth. "Then the chamber has changed our memories."

"Or the figure was never separate from the chamber," the man in the white coat suggested.

I turned on him. "You just said you couldn’t remember it."

"I’m suggesting an explanation, not claiming certainty."

"Then suggest something useful."

He accepted the rebuke without answering, instead tracing the outer circle of the new symbol with one finger. He explained that the facility’s records contained similar markings, once believed to distinguish observation layers and different levels of access. The original records had been incomplete, however, and no one had ever explained why the central symbol was missing.

"Could it mean we’re trapped?" Nyelle asked.

"Possibly."

She glanced at me. "I preferred it when he was pretending to know things."

"Get in line."

Her brief laugh faded when another vibration passed through the chamber. The man lifted his hand from the symbol and looked at me with an expression that had lost its earlier uncertainty.

"I don’t think the knocks were a signal to open something," he said. "They were a confirmation that the fourth response has been recognized by something beyond this structure."

The ache in my palm sharpened. Three faint branches had formed around the blue line beneath my skin, and when I tried to follow the energy moving through them, the familiar currents slipped away before I could understand their direction. The fourth response hadn’t vanished; it had settled somewhere inside me, leaving my usual methods unreliable.

"Everyone needs to move away from the platforms," I said. "We have no System, no working map, and no idea what those knocks activated. Standing here and waiting for the chamber to explain itself isn’t a strategy."

I pointed toward a narrow passage between two slabs of black stone. Its edges were too clean to be the result of the shifting floor, and I couldn’t remember seeing it before.

"There’s our next move."

"Don’t go through it," Mother said.

I turned toward her. "Why?"

"I don’t know." Her eyes had fixed on the three-ring symbol, and she stepped closer, studying the empty center. "I’ve seen that mark before, on the facility records. The outer rings were visible, but every copy showed the center as blank."

"Why was it blank?"

"The records said the symbol couldn’t be reproduced."

The man in the white coat looked sharply at her. "You never told me that."

"You never asked about the records I couldn’t explain."

"Liora—"

"Don’t."

Her quiet command silenced him. I had learned enough about the secrets between them to know that forcing an answer now would waste time, so I focused on the symbol instead. "Can you recognize what’s missing?"

Mother held her hand above the empty center without touching it. The three rings brightened, and when she pulled back, a thin thread of light followed her wrist, bending into a shape that looked almost like a letter. She stared at it with growing horror before whispering a name.

"Elarin."

The chamber went silent. Zero’s head snapped up, the imitation stepped backward, and the man in the white coat went pale. I remembered hearing that name in the collapsing chamber, but I still didn’t know whether it belonged to my mother, the structure, or something speaking through it.

"Who is Elarin?" I asked.

Mother closed her eyes. "I don’t know."

"Is that your name?"

"I don’t know, Veyric." Anger entered her voice, directed more at herself than me. "I remember hearing it before I was moved to the upper facility. I remember being told never to repeat it near the lower structure, but I don’t remember who told me or why."

The light around her wrist faded, and for a moment I thought the chamber had accepted her answer. Then the empty center of the symbol filled with a dark mark, neither silver nor blue, but black. The man in the white coat stumbled away from the platform.

"No," he whispered. "That designation was removed."

Footsteps sounded from the open passage, slow and deliberate, approaching from somewhere beyond the doorway. Nyelle moved closer to me, while Zero positioned itself between the sound and the imitation; Mother remained fixed on the black mark as if it had exposed something she had spent years trying to bury.

The footsteps stopped just beyond the threshold.

"You have brought the wrong mother," the voice inside my chest said.

Mother froze, and her hand closed around my arm. For the first time since the facility, she looked at me not as a mother trying to protect her son, but as someone who had just discovered that the person she was trying to save might not be the person she remembered giving birth to.

I stepped in front of her. "Who are you?"

A human-shaped hand appeared against the black stone, its long fingers spread across the doorway. A thin silver line ran down its palm, identical to the mark that had appeared on my hand before the fourth response entered me.

Then the voice spoke again.

"Ask her what happened to the child she carried out."

Mother made a small, broken sound. I turned toward her, but she shook her head without looking at me, her lips moving silently as though she were trying to form a name she could no longer remember.

I didn’t ask her again. Not yet.

The hand withdrew, and the darkness swallowed it.

"This time, Veyric," the voice said, "make sure you bring the right one home."