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THE LUNEFABLE REVIEW

I See Murders Before They Happen

I See Murders Before They Happen: A Witness, a Deadline, and Very Inconvenient Noodles

Su Miaoyi knows details she cannot explain. Helping the police may clear one mystery while making her look like another.

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THE SHORT TAKE

A lively supernatural procedural with an excellent everyday voice, though its psychiatric shorthand and intimidating detective require a more skeptical reading.

The strangest evidence is the person reporting it

Su Miaoyi leaves a hospital trying to understand what is happening in her own mind, then finds a detail from a terrifying vision standing directly in front of her. A familiar tattoo makes an otherwise ordinary encounter impossible to dismiss. I See Murders Before They Happen establishes its attraction through that collision between an explanation she has just been given and a world refusing to behave accordingly.

The discovery upstairs in her own building sharpens the problem. She knows more than she should, but knowing does not supply an acceptable account of how she learned it. Reporting a crime brings her into contact with investigators who need evidence, and she herself has become part of the puzzle they must explain.

Calm analysis arrives before the fear catches up

The heroine’s unfamiliar expertise does more interesting work than an ordinary premonition. She notices evidence, estimates what it might mean, and only afterward seems to remember how frightened she ought to be. Her reactions do not fit neatly into either unshakable professional competence or overwhelmed civilian panic.

That lag gives the writing a recognizable rhythm: observation, practical inference, then a delayed return to the awful fact of where she is standing. Her grip on the hem of her shirt becomes a small, persistent sign of distress. She wants to avoid touching what it has touched, while the police see another behavior to question.

The bodily discomfort also prevents the visions from feeling like a convenient information subscription. They interrupt her day, frighten her, and leave her with consequences other people cannot see. The mystery of why she has this knowledge remains more engaging than a simple claim that she is unusually gifted.

A novelist cannot put the update streak on hold

Su Miaoyi’s writing deadline gives the interview scenes their best comic counterweight. The detective is considering coincidences, motives, and how much she might be concealing. She is also thinking about the update she must publish and the income that depends on keeping readers returning. The difference in priorities is funny because hers is not actually trivial.

Food works similarly. After a day of fear, waiting, and questions, instant noodles become an important event. Her uncertain offer to share them briefly reverses who appears to need what from the conversation. The officer’s scrutiny cannot make hunger disappear, and her appetite does not make the investigation less serious.

These details give the heroine a life beyond being useful to a detective. She is not waiting in an empty room for a mystery to provide her with purpose. It has interrupted work she already needed to finish.

Trust develops unevenly on both sides of the handcuffs

Zhuang Yanzheng has understandable reasons to question an account that sounds impossible. His willingness to test part of it gives the partnership a way forward without instantly converting him into a believer. The field investigation makes their conflicting approaches visible: she searches for a remembered perspective while he looks for physical traces.

His conduct is another matter. Keeping her restrained to him, dragging her between positions, and treating her discomfort as a diagnostic curiosity are not simply charming signs of a stern professional. The humor sometimes relies on her inconvenience more than it questions his authority. A convincing relationship will require respect to develop alongside reliance on her information.

The sketch artist offers a useful variation on the response to her. He notices the organized quality of her description rather than only its odd origin. Through him, the question changes from whether she sounds believable to what sort of experience her account seems to contain.

The cat dispute belongs in the same story

A pet-shop call gives Su Miaoyi a different kind of confrontation. The manager tries to shift responsibility according to which customer looks more important, and she objects to being treated differently once her payment is no longer the immediate objective. The scene echoes the investigative problem without repeating it: she again has to insist that somebody attend to what happened rather than the convenient story about her.

Her rapid reassessment of a well-dressed stranger after he supports her is amusingly candid. She is observant without being free from snap judgments. The encounter also introduces questions about recognition and her cat’s changed behavior, adding uncertainty without immediately handing over an explanation.

The visit to her aunt and uncle makes an equally valuable contribution. Money sent home, a bus journey chosen over a taxi, and time helping sell vegetables establish real attachments. Their teasing affection supplies warmth that neither the formal police rooms nor the prospective wealthy-family subplot can provide.

The ordinary voice is stronger than the diagnostic shorthand

The principal weakness is the handling of mental illness. A preliminary diagnosis becomes a repeated explanation for strangeness, a reason for suspicion, and a source of jokes. The detective even considers it as a convenient excuse. Those shortcuts flatten a serious subject and should be read as flaws in the fictional framing, rather than accepted explanations of real psychiatric care.

The violent visions are also more graphic than their investigative purpose always requires. Yet the opening is consistently engaging when it lets Su Miaoyi speak, bargain, work, and make mistakes around the uncanny information. Her shift from distrusted reporter toward someone officers might ask for help provides momentum without exhausting the deeper mystery. The strongest invitation is to follow this particular inconvenient witness, whose next encounter may be extraordinary even when all she wanted was to deliver a cat and get home for dinner.

Based on chapters 1–8 of the English edition. This is an opening impression, not a full-series verdict. No later plot developments are discussed.

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